great that you did the roof angles already, hadn't gotten around to changing them as yet. they look really good and make the roof look so much closer to completion.
Good to hear that you like it!!
about the window colors...I'm not certain about the chosen color for the part most in the shade, at the moment I think that the colors are a bit to close to each other.
Agreed, I have made some changes to them, already used some texture for the glass panels, that gives a better idea than using a plain color:
- newdelft-9Q_ROOF_02.png (80.88 KiB) Viewed 4037 times
If you like this look then I will also apply it to the glass windows in the gaps. This can also be used for the big glass panels at groundlevel.
But as you may see, I have made some other changes too:
- Recolored the remaining red lines
- Gaps on the left side: Looking at the architects drawings, I believe that the bottom of those gaps should be the same width. Also made the front one of those two a bit longer.
- Small/narrow row of windows at the top of the gaps: Looking at some pictures taken from the right side of the building I noticed that at least the 2 main gaps on the right have a small row of windows at the top. I am not sure if the left gaps and the hole at the front have those too, but I have drawn them in.
- The gaps at the right side have a bit more clearer visible ending, although I am not sure if the ending for the gap at the very end is looking good enough. Although that may also be because of the transparent blue around it. Would you mind pasting this version in a screenshot mock-up to see how it looks?
What do you think of these changes? And if you are completely happy with the roof, I will see if I can apply some texture to that. And (as said above) If you are happy with the way the glass looks, I will also draw that in the gaps.